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@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title = "Amber"
It was time to end work for the day.
We headed out of the office to the nearest train station.
The plan: do groceries, cook dinner, head back home.
The plan: do groceries, head back home, cook dinner.
We still didn't have any dinner plans for today, so it was time to settle on those.
@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Her and I have never been the best ideators when it came to brainstorming food,
--- Considering all the quintessential dishes in our exquisite home-cooked meal menu...\
--- Mm-hmm.\
--- ...taking into account my desires and needs, hopes, and dreams...\
--- ...taking into account all my desires and needs, hopes, and dreams...\
--- Uh-huh.\
--- I conclude...
@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ Eat.~}~}
--- Oh come on, you know I hate bell peppers!!\
--- Too bad.
Amber's face turned gloomy.
Amber's face turned an unimpressed expression.
--- I'll pick them out of your plate.\
--- Promise?\
@ -99,8 +99,8 @@ You haven't _earned_ it.\
--- Wait, what?
But she realised it too late.
I left her behind in front of the store, with the same old surprised look on her face.
But she realised too late.
I left her behind, in front of the store, with the same old surprised look on her face.
It's honestly surprising how often she falls for that one.
You'd think her fox genetics would make her really swift and quick-witted, but it's the exact opposite.
@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ With the groceries done, and Amber still bewildered by my trick, it was time to
Four streets down the road, a five minute walk later, was our little house.
Shoes taken off at the entrance.
My paws felt immediate relief after a whole day of wearing them.
My paws felt immediate relief.
Three rooms.
One mine, one Amber's, one shared.
@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ Again.
--- So you haven't cleaned your room yet.\
--- I don't have enough fuel!
Let me eat first!\
--- Try not to clean your room afterwards and I'm turning off the breakers.\
--- Try to not clean your room afterwards and I'm switching off your breakers.\
--- Sure thing, _MOM_! --- she exclaimed as she sat down in front of the table.\
--- Knock it off.
@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ Just followed the recipe.\
--- You should make them more often.\
--- Ha ha, we'll see.
We finished our place, and I once again reminded her.
We finished our plates, and I once again reminded her.
--- Don't forget to clean your room.\
--- Yes sir, Mr. Vector!\